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I would not have published that....
Author: Communication 101
Date: 09-17-2021 - 13:02

LES Wrote:
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> Below is a write-up on Clem's analysis. He's got
> a 12 minute savings. With the Antelope Valley
> time in hand it would be nice to know the speeds
> through the tunnels and down through Clarita. I
> don't think they would hit the 125 mph as proposed
> through Clarita.
>
> [calrailfoundation.org]
> n2.pdf
>


You would be wise to get a better writer to redo that article. It was dumb to put in bold the 'myths' he says were being refuted. Someone scanning the article might just skip to the bold and come away thinking those are facts the author was emphasizing, instead of the opposite. I did, initially.

Put the word 'myths' in bold, and unbold the dozen myths. Also wise to update the 8 year old article.

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  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... BOB2 09-16-2021 - 12:52
  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... RRR 09-16-2021 - 13:38
  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... Commenter 09-16-2021 - 14:20
  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... LES 09-16-2021 - 15:33
  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... Sgt. Joe Friday 09-17-2021 - 08:57
  Re: I would not have known that..... Thank you Mouse.... LES 09-17-2021 - 10:17
  I would not have published that.... Communication 101 09-17-2021 - 13:02
  Re: I would not have published that.... LES 09-17-2021 - 14:08


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