Re: I would not have published that....
From what I can see Clem's work is no longer WWW accessible. This was the closest reference to the original work I could find.
Communication 101 Wrote:
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> LES Wrote:
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> > Below is a write-up on Clem's analysis. He's
> got
> > a 12 minute savings. With the Antelope Valley
> > time in hand it would be nice to know the
> speeds
> > through the tunnels and down through Clarita.
> I
> > don't think they would hit the 125 mph as
> proposed
> > through Clarita.
> >
> >
> [
calrailfoundation.org]
>
> > n2.pdf
> >
>
>
> You would be wise to get a better writer to redo
> that article. It was dumb to put in bold the
> 'myths' he says were being refuted. Someone
> scanning the article might just skip to the bold
> and come away thinking those are facts the author
> was emphasizing, instead of the opposite. I did,
> initially.
>
> Put the word 'myths' in bold, and unbold the dozen
> myths. Also wise to update the 8 year old
> article.